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Easy Ways on How to Create an Effective Outline for Critical Essays

Critical essays are important for students at all levels of education. As a child, you may have to critically analyze the things around you to learn about them. A critical essay may involve the positive as well as negative sides of the topic so that the reader can see both these aspects. 

An outline helps the readers in getting a feel of the content of the whole essay. In the following lines, let us take a look at simple hacks for outlining a critical essay.

The topic

As an essay writer, you should have a relatively good command of the chosen topic to write my essay. It is advised to research the internet for different sources related to the topic. The understanding of the topic means that the writer will be able to break it down to several subtopics. 

An example can be given regarding obesity which is a big problem for the people in general and kids in particular. Comprehensive research will allow the writer to come up with all the relevant causes of the issue and the ways to control it. You cannot make a good outline unless you have read thoroughly about the topic.


This section of the outline will introduce the topic and the major issue faced by the society. The points in this section should contain some statistics and facts. The reader should be convinced that the topic chosen poses a serious threat to society.

You can also state your thesis statement in this part of the outline. In the case of obesity, the thesis statement may be,” the problem is persistent and the government and other authorities have not taken enough actions about it”.


The body part of the essay contains three distinct paragraphs at the minimum. There can be more paragraphs in this section depending upon the requirement. The critical essay outline should mention the major points and the sub-points within them. In the case of obesity, the lack of exercise can be one major point. The writer will then search for the reasons which lead to a lack of exercise. The first point may be indoor video games. 

The writer will have to provide evidence from some past research to justify that playing video games causes obesity. The next point will be the role of parents and teachers in this scenario. The overall role of schools in providing space for physical activities should also be discussed.

The second point will be the higher consumption of fast food by the children. The essay writing service will have to provide evidence that the consumption of fast food causes obesity to increase. The ingredients of fast food may also be analyzed which causes obesity in the children. 

The role of fast food companies and their marketing campaigns can also be assessed. The writer should evaluate the marketing campaigns of fast food companies critically. It should be justified with some evidence that these marketing efforts have been focused on children. Some changes may also be proposed.


This part will relate to the thesis statement. The evidence provided in the body section will be used to accept the thesis statement. The role of authorities and government may be revisited and some improvements may be proposed. Remember, For best essay samples contact the best essay writing service online. The conclusion may restate all the important points made in the body section so that the reader can also revise them. 

Some readers jump directly to the conclusion after reading the introduction. They just want to see if these two sections are logically related to each other or not. If there is a logical connection between the two, they will read the body section with more interest.

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The British army is investigating an apparent hack after its official Twitter and YouTube accounts were compromised on Sunday. News of the breach was first reported by Web3 is Going Great. According to the blog, both accounts were simultaneously compromised to promote two different cryptocurrency scams.

Although it has since been scrubbed, the army’s verified Twitter account was briefly changed to look like a page for The Possessed, a project involving a collection of 10,000 animated NFTs with a price floor of 0.58 Ethereum (approximately $1,063). During that time, the account tweeted out multiple links to a fake minting website. It’s possible the hack is part of a broader campaign to leverage the recent popularity of The Possessed. On Saturday, the project’s official Twitter account warned its followers of another verified account that was similarly hacked to promote a NFT scam using The Possessed brand.

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Over on YouTube, the army’s channel has been made to look like a page for Ark Invest. As of the writing of this article, the channel is livestreaming videos that repurpose old footage of Elon Musk, Jack Dorsey and Ark CEO Katie Wood discussing cryptocurrency. The clips feature an overlay promoting “double your money” Bitcoin and Ethereum scams. According to Web3 is Going Great, a similar scheme netted scammers $1.3 million this past May. It’s unclear who is behind the attacks.

“We are aware of a breach of the army’s Twitter and YouTube accounts and an investigation is underway,” an army spokesperson told The Guardian. “We take information security extremely seriously and are resolving the issue. Until the investigation is complete it would be inappropriate to comment further.”

While 2022 has seen its share of crypto hacks, few have targeted government organizations like the British army. To date, most have involved groups like Yuga Labs, the creator of the popular Bored Ape Yacht Club NFT collection. In April, the project’s official Instagram account was compromised in a $2.4 million phishing scam. BAYC’s Discord community has also fallen to two separate phishing attacks in 2022.

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In its first in-person event since 2020, GDQ’s Summer Games Done Quick 2022 raised more than $3.01 million for Doctors Without Borders. In all, some of the world’s best speedrunners descended on Bloomington, Minnesota to complete 134 different playthroughs of games like Doom Eternal, Tunic and Control. Across seven days of programming, Games Done Quick collected more than 42,000 individual donations.

And while the final tally fell short of the record-breaking $3.4 million the organization secured for the Prevent Cancer Foundation at Awesome Games Done Quick at the start of the year, it was more than the $2.9 million raised during SGDQ 2021. This year’s event saw the departure of Kasumi "Sumichu" Yogi. For the past eight years, Yogi has served as GDQ’s director of marketing and business development, helping the organization grow into the community cornerstone that it is today. Games Done Quick’s next fundraiser, the all-women Flame Fatales showcase, starts on August 21st, with proceeds from the event slated to go to the Malala Fund.

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